You have provided a somewhat proficient analysis of your feedback, giving examples of both positive and negative comments received, and mentioning what was done to improve your video; however, you have not elaborated on how this feedback was beneficial to you enough.
You need to: 1) Elaborate on how this feedback would benefit you if you were in the music industry 2) Explain clearly why it is important to evaluate your work 3) Elaborate on why you chose youtube to showcase your rough cut
You have provided a somewhat proficient analysis of your feedback, giving examples of both positive and negative comments received, and mentioning what was done to improve your video; however, you have not elaborated on how this feedback was beneficial to you enough.
ReplyDeleteYou need to:
1) Elaborate on how this feedback would benefit you if you were in the music industry
2) Explain clearly why it is important to evaluate your work
3) Elaborate on why you chose youtube to showcase your rough cut